The improvise game

Ok, so this may not be a text adventure game, but I think it fits best here.

So what is the improvise game? It's simple. I will start by writing a begining to a story. Then I'll stop and the next poster will continue the story. Here's an example:

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Poster A: Bob found a box on the ground. He bent down and removed the tape holding the box togeather. He opened the box and looked inside.

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Poster B: Bob looked inside the box and found a boxing glove. Before he could move away, the glove sprung out of the box and socked Bob square in the face.

So there you go, I hope that is a good enough example.

A few rules:

No Godmod'ing - In other words, no posts where the main character suddenly teleported, got an item that wasn't stated to have, and no super human abilities. I am aloud to GMod if I so wish. I may add on this list.
No double posting.
No killing the main character.
You are only aloud only 4 sentences max.
Aviod using "and" multiple times. I shouldn't see sentences like this: "Bob did this and that and this and that and this and that and this and that..."

Breaking any of this rules will result in your post being igonored.

Ok, so lets begin.


Andrew was in his bed sleeping in. At 1pm, he woke up due to a loud noise. As he got up, he listened to the noise more closely.

Colin_is_power wrote:

Andrew was in his bed sleeping in. At 1pm, he woke up due to a loud noise. As he got up, he listened to the noise more closely.

He couldnt tell what the noise was but he heard the noise coming from downstairs. He slowly opened the door and started slowly creeping his way downstairs.

As Andrew walked down the staircase, the steps gave way and he fell. This is what happens when you live on the 5th floor of a hotel. When Andrew finally landed, he realized he wasn't feeling much pain. He got up, brushed off the dust and looked around.

Looking Around He saw no one in sight. Infact its as if the hotel was deserted but he thought to himself that was impossible. Andrew notice his left arm was bleeding a bit from the fall.

Andrew walked around throughout the unknow room. He soon came upon a shining gold door. Well, gold implies shine, right? Anyway, he opened the door.